by Ashson
Please stop writing in the non con section you’re awful at it. It’s like the worst kind of soap opera tat. Your characters are flat and unconvincing but worst of all your writing is just bland.
though this one was a little rapey for my tastes, I liked Jenny, and really liked the clever ending.
Would have been nice to have a little more reluctance. Glad she got compensated at the end though!
If you think that this is drivel maybe you should grow a sack and write yourself
A bit traditional. I would have preferred for them to finish up properly with her being filled.